>1.使用非谓语动词形式
用非谓语动词可以使句子简洁。例如:
We were surrounded by a variety of buildings. We found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park and we felt joyful.
→Surrounded by a variety of buildings, we found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park feeling joyful.
>2.使用with的复合结构
with的复合结构,也就是独立主格结构,常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动性,使文章读起来更简洁明了。例如:
I could not go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me.
→I could not go on studying with so much noise troubling me.
>3.使用复合句
复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来,从而使表达显得高级。例如:
①Occasions are quite rare when I have the time to spend a day with my kids.
②It is our belief that improvements in environment will contribute to the development of our society.
③Additionally, as the data shows, there are roughly 350 million smokers in China, 75% of which are males while 25% are females. What amazes us is that around 540 million people are affected by second hand smoke.
>4.使用倒装句,强调句,虚拟语气等
使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动,加强语气,使评卷老师感受到作者的强烈情感。
He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.
→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.(强调句)
→Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.(倒装句)
综合使用以上句式,长短句结合,可以增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
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